A sense of humour can well affect our mood. It is proved by a lot of sciensits that laugh has a great influence on everyone's health. People with a sense of humour can better cope with some problems because they can see a positive and a funny way to solve the stressful situation. It is important in our social life as well. In conacts with other people it is good to laugh at the same things that they do. A sense of humour makes us feel better and it provides a good mood.
In your paragraph you talk about many more things than just mood: coping with problems, health, social life. So your topic sentence and your concluding sentence are misleading and too narrow.
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